Luckily, the transcription was done by Paspal himself! So I didnt have that much work on this song.ありがとうございます!!— こまつりな / 狛茉璃奈@6/2お誕生日動画&配信 (@kmtn62) December 8, 2019
どちらでもなく、この曲だけで別のお話です!登場人物も異なります!
In my own transcription and translation i included the "engrish" from the video (also for the subscripts). I actually hoped for a complete CD, but instead this song is on its own. Oh well, it doesn't make the song worse :). I'm hyped for Zenoth already... I will surely buy it if it's on booth as DL. I wish Lalue and Paspal best of luck on the M3, I hope they stay safe!
If you haven't seen the video of altaria, check it out (it has a full MV!!!) here:
I made my own version too here
This song is so so so amazing, the technique lalue sings with, the sentiment she puts in her voice, the consistency with which she can hit those beautiful high notes after the "Mindless" / "Isolation". Just wow. There is nothing i can find about this composition that disappoints me.
Anyway, this song is about another mechanical angel, who wants to obtain power, desperately. She offers herself to a devil as a sacrifice... and gains the power to control time, in order to purify the world from sins.
Altaria
Music & Lyric:Paspal
Vocal:Rina Komatsu
Illustration:REL*
楽園の扉閉ざした
罪嘆きの《旋律》
絶望に濡れたその指で
引き金を弾く 今 Bullet of sin
rakuen no tobira tozashita
tsumi nageki no refrain
zetsubou ni nureta sono yubi de
hikigane wo hajiku ima bullet of sin
I shut the doors of heaven
a sin-lamenting <<Melody (refrain)>>
with fingers soaked in despair
I pull the trigger now.
Bullet of Sin
残酷な刻を統べる力を求めて
交わす契約の代償 命と引き換えに
zankoku na toki wo suberu chikara wo motomete
kawasu keiyaku no daishou inochi to hikikae ni
I seek for power to govern in a cruel time
I exchange my life to forge a compensating pact
Aah
MINDLESS
刺し込む痛み 零れる意識の狭間で
軋む身体 動かない指 ウマレカワルセカイ
Sashikomu itami koboreru ishiki no hazama de
kishimu karada ugokanai yubi umarekawaru sekai
I'm overflowing with piercing pain, I'm at the threshold of my conciousness
My body creaks, I cannot move my fingers...ThE wOrLd Is ReBoRn
覚醒 闇色に染まる空で
記憶は忘却の《幻影》
救済と断罪を握り
君へと手向ける銃声
煉獄に堕ちた願い
慟哭がかき消すから
滲む未来へ 撃ち込め《絶望》──。
kakusei yamiiro ni somaru sora de
kioku wa boukyaku no phantom
kyuusai to danzai wo nigiri
kimi e to tamukeru juusei
rengoku ni ochita negai
doukoku ga kakikesu kara
nijimu mirai e uchikome despair
I awaken in a sky dyed in darkness
My memories are the <<phantom>> of oblivion
I grasp salvation and condamnation,
offering a gun shot to you
My desire has fallen down to purgatory
As my desperate screams are surpressed
I fire into the blurred future with <<despair>>
冷酷な神を裁く奇跡を信じて
塞いだ視界と感情 心鍵を掛けた
reikoku na kami wo sabaku kiseki wo shinjite
fusaida shikai to kanjou kokoro kagi wo kaketa
To judge the god of cruelty, I believed in miracles
My vision and feelings dammed up
I locked my heart
Aah
ISOLATION
歪んだ十字 穢れた赦罪の刃で
刻む身体 悪魔の刻印 アトモドリデキナイ
iganda juuji kegareta shazai no yaiba de
kizamu karada akuma no shirushi atomodori dekinai
I violated the distorted cross with a blade of justification
I carve the sign of the devil in my body ThErE iS nO wAy BaCk
侵蝕 咎色に爆ぜる空で
その身を捧ぐ《生贄》
制裁と贖罪を握り
君へと繋がる忠誠
奈落へと消えた想い
残響だけが続いた
滲む瞳で 進め《祭壇》──。
shinshoku togairo ni hazeru sora de
sono mi wo sasagu sacrifice
seisai to shokuzai wo nigiri
kimi e to tsunagaru chuusei
naraku e to kieta omoi
zankyou dake ga tsudzukeita
nijimu hitomi de susume altaria
Corrosion... The sky split open with the colour of the sin
I offer this body as a <<sacrifice>>
I grasp onto punishment and atonement
This is the loyalty that connects me to you
My enthusiasm has disappeared into the abyss
Only an echo remained
with blurred eyes, I advanced to the <<altar (Altaria)>>
(The Power to control time is a contract with the devil.
After loosing the ability to feel pain, al I had left was to entrust my heart to deep darkness.
With that chilling smile of his, the deviled smiled.
I can't recall my true purpose anymore
Sacrifice was myself, devoted body and mind)
MINDLESS
刺し込む痛み 零れる意識の狭間で
軋む身体 動かない指 ウマレカワルセカイ
Sashikomu itami koboreru ishiki no hazama de
kishimu karada ugokanai yubi umarekawaru sekai
I'm overflowing with piercing pain, I'm at the threshold of my conciousness
My body creaks, I cannot move my fingers...ThE wOrLd Is ReBoRn
覚醒 闇色に染まる空で
記憶は忘却の《幻影》
救済と断罪を握り
君へと手向ける銃声
煉獄に堕ちた願い
慟哭がかき消すから
滲む未来へ 撃ち込め《絶望》──。
kakusei yamiiro ni somaru sora de
kioku wa boukyaku no phantom
kyuusai to danzai wo nigiri
kimi e to tamukeru juusei
rengoku ni ochita negai
doukoku ga kakikesu kara
nijimu mirai e uchikome despair
I awaken in a sky dyed in darkness
My memories are the phantom of oblivion
I grasp salvation and condamnation,
offering a gun shot to you
My desire has fallen down to purgatory
As my desperate screams are surpressed
I fire into the blurred future with <<despair>>
(The sign of the devil that corrodes body, is the proof of my sacrifice
Those who've been touched by sin, must atone to their actions
Even if their body has already rotten to the core.)
Altaria
I have also made singable lyrics as a birthday present to Lalue/Komatsu Rina:
I shut the doors of heaven behind me
and sing a sin-lamenting <<Melody>>
with fingers soaked in despair i grasp my gun
I pull the trigger now and fire
a Bullet of Sin
I seek for power to govern in a cruel time that is now on us
I exchange my life and all I have, to forge a compensating pact
Aah
MINDLESS
I'm overflowing with a piercing pain, I'm at the threshold of conciousness
My body creaks, I cannot move my fingers...ThE wOrLd Is ReBoRn
I awaken in a sky dyed in darkness
My memories are the <<phantom>> of oblivion
I grasp salvation and condamnation,
offering a gun shot to you
My desire has fallen down to
purgatory, As my desperate screams are
surpressed, I fire into the blurred future with <<despair>>
To judge the god of cruelty, I believed that miracles exist
My vision and feelings dammed up inside
and I locked my heart
Aah
ISOLATION
I violated the distorted cross with a blade of justification
I carve the sign of the devil in my body ThErE iS nO wAy BaCk
Corrosion... The sky split open sin-coloured
I offer this body as a <<sacrifice>>
I grasp onto punishment and atonement
This is the loyalty that connects me to you
My enthusiasm has disappeared
into the abyss, Only an echo remained
right now with blurred eyes, I advanced to the <<altar>>
(The Power to control time is a contract with the devil.
After losing the ability to feel pain, all I had left was to entrust my heart to deep darkness.
With that chilling smile of his, the deviled smiled.
I can't recall my true purpose anymore
Sacrifice was myself, devo ted body and mind)
MINDLESS
I'm overflowing with a piercing pain, I'm at the threshold of conciousness
My body creaks, I cannot move my fingers...ThE wOrLd Is ReBoRn
I awaken in a sky dyed in black of darkness
My memories are the phantom of oblivion
I grasp salvation and condamnation,
offering a gun shot to you
My desire has fallen down to
purgatory and as my desperate screams
are surpressed, I fire into the blurred future with <<despair>>
(The sign of the devil that corrodes my body, is the proof of my sacrifice
Those who've been touched by sin, must atone to their actions
Even if their body has already rotten to the core.)
Altaria